What Exactly Are Publishers, Agents and Editors Looking For, and Why Do They Reject Good Books?

An agent told a friend of mine: 'We're turningabout why this publisher is the best one for your
down lots of good work unless it ticks absolutelybook - and mention this in your query letter.
all the right boxes.'(6) The writer has had at least one book
Interesting. But what are those 'right boxes'published previously - and made a fortune from it
exactly? All the agent knew was: 'We'll know itYour new book must of course target that same
when we see it.'market. Create a new marketing plan based on
After giving this some serious thought, I've comewhat worked well last time.
up with ten boxes that seem to cover everything(7) Publishing this book will maintain or enhance our
a publisher, agent or editor might look for in areputation, not harm it
perfect novel submission. But ticking all ten won'tWrite to the best of your ability. Strive for quality
be easy.and accuracy. Try to say something new, or in a
(1) I stayed up all night to finish itnew way. Avoid libel and plagiarism. Don't take
You need a strong story that grips from therisky short-cuts. And have solid evidence to back
outset and maintains that grip. Plunge straight intoup anything controversial.
the action. Choose the most exciting path(8) The writer's sense of humor matches my
whenever you have a choice. And don't giveown
away the ending too soon.Whose books do you avoid reading in public
Get people to read your outline before you writebecause they make you laugh too much? Are
the book. Ask them how they'd make it moreyou as funny as them? Do you have any
compelling. Remove the parts they found boring.evidence of that? If so, find out who their agents
Get them to summarise the story, then deleteand publishers are, and make them your primary
the parts they left out, or make them moretargets. Ask your friends which writers' humor is
memorable.closest to your own, and target their agents and
(2) It's beautifully written, easy to read, and didn'tpublishers too. If you have friends who are good
make me want to scrawl all over it with myat writing jokes or telling them, work with them
editing pento improve your book.
Reading your work aloud will make most problems(9) The writer is a friend or acquaintance whose
and glitches glaringly apparent - especially if youopinion and expertise I trust, and who I know I
do it in front of an audience. Even if you're ancan rely on
experienced editor it's worth sending a sample ofBuild your name and reputation. Enter
your work to a professional to see if he spotscompetitions; write stories and articles for
anything you've missed.magazines, newspapers and websites; represent a
(3) I immediately saw a very large, easy-to-reachgroup or organisation and get your name in the
market for it (and money signs flashed beforepress regularly; be outspoken, and perhaps a little
my eyes)controversial.
If you want a major publisher to take you onDo things that get you noticed by the publisher,
then there needs to be a major market for youragent or editor regularly, both online and in the
book.real world. Be active in the places he visits online.
Study that publisher's market before you evenJoin an organisation he belongs to, and take an
come up with your idea, then think about howactive role. Invite him to speak to your writing
well your idea fits that market. Would you begroup, give a talk to one of his groups, meet him
better off approaching a different publisher, or aat an event, and so on.
smaller one, or coming up with a different idea?Send him a letter or email praising his work and
(4) The writer submitted a detailed marketing planasking a relevant question. Mention something that
with projected sales figureshe's discussed elsewhere that you're also
Mainstream publishers want books that will sell atinterested in - a shared hobby, for example.
least 20,000 copies. So you need a marketing planSlowly build a rapport. After a while, casually
that demonstrates how you could sell that manymention that you've written a book and ask if
books.he'd be interested in seeing it. If he says no,
Think about your target publisher's market, andcontinue the relationship anyway - he might
list the different ways you can access it, and howchange his mind or know someone else who's
many books you expect to sell - a conservativeinterested.
guesstimate that's realistic and achievable.(10) The writer is a celebrity
Evidence of sales figures from previous booksTo become a celebrity you need unshakable
would also help.self-belief, supreme self-confidence, and endless,
If you can't get anywhere near 20,000, look for aruthless, shameless self-promotion. Do something
market that's larger or easier for you to reach.worth celebrating - something connected with
That might mean picking a different publisher andyour book. And then do the shameless
a different idea for your book. Or you couldself-promotion thing.
consider a smaller publisher, or self-publishing.Well, that's what I think the 'right boxes' are. So
(5) This book exactly matches our target marketnow everyone will know what they're looking for,
and sits perfectly alongside our other booksbe able to recognise it when they see it, and do it
Get a copy of the publisher's current catalogueconsistently. That's got to be good news for all of
and imagine your book listed there too. If it looksus.
out of place, choose a different publisher. Think