Proofreading Exercise - Three Subtle Errors

There are far too many proofreading exerciseslikely to take risks (which don't always pay off)
out there that make the mistake of presentingand they have a tendency to become bored
the proof reader with a surfeit of errors. There'seasily.
at least one spelling mistakes in each sentenceThe Water Hand An elongated palm with long
and examples of appalling grammar in everyfingers. The fingers are always tapered,
paragraph. Whilst this gives the novice proofsometimes very noticeably so, almost pointed.
reader plenty to do, it also leaves them with aWater Hand personality types are the most
very false impression of what it's like tosensitive of all the chierotypes. On the plus side,
proofread in the real world.this makes them extremely gentle, caring and
In the real world you are likely to be checkingempathetic. Unfortunately, they are also very
proofs that are the culmination of great care andeasy to upset. One careless word can have a
attention, not to mention a not inconsiderabledevastating effect upon the Water Hand
amount of professional pride. In other words, you'llpersonality type.
find very few errors in the proofs you check.They are also the most artistic and imaginative of
The proofreading exercise that follows simulatescheirotypes, with a highly-developed asthetic
the kind of you are far more likely to besense and a taste for the finer things. Unlike the
confronted with in an authentic publishingFire Hand and Earth Hand personality types, they
environment. It contains only three errors. Beare not known for their ability to deal with the
warned, none of these errors is glaringly obvious.practicalities of everyday life.
You should be able to complete the followingThe Air Hand A small, square-ish palm, with long
exercise in approximately ten minutes.fingers, usually rounded at the tips but occasionally
The Proofreading Exercisespatulate.
What the Shape of Your Hand Says About YouThis hand is typically associated with intellectual
There are four fundamental hand shapes or, asand logical personalities. They are, in a sense, a
they are known in palmistry, cheirotypes. Just ascombination of the practical and the imaginative,
your astrological star sign informs yourable to apply their intelligence to solve even the
personality, so does your cheirotype.most challenging of problems.
The factors that help define each cheirotype areUnfortunately, this particular cheirotype can, in
palm shape and size, and finger shape and size.extreme cases, display an almost Spock-like
Each cheirotype is identified with one of the fourpersonality, shining the cold, hard light of intellect
classical elements: Earth, Fire, Water and Air.into the realm of the emotions where it is likely to
The Earth Hand A small palm, with short fingers.prove intrusive, unhelpful and even destructive.
The fingers can be either rounded at the tips orThe Proofreading Exercise, Solution
spatulate (square or flat) at the tips.Did you spot the three errors?
This hand is usually associated with the mostThat's right; the first error is in the fifth
practical personality types. These no-nonsenseparagraph, we have "comparatively shot fingers"
people get things done. They're organised, realisticinstead of "comparatively short fingers".
and hardworking. They don't have time forThe second error is in the eighth paragraph,
daydreaming or for pondering what ifs and ifwhere we have "most sensitive of all the
onlys. Pragmatic and sensible, the Earth Handchierotypes" when we should have "most
personality is utterly dependable and makes asensitive of all the cheirotypes". Tricky one, that,
great asset to any industrious enterprise.given the unfamiliarity of the word.
The Fire Hand An elongated palm withThe third error is tucked away in the ninth
comparatively shot fingers. The fingers can beparagraph we have "a highly-developed asthetic
rounded or spatulate.sense" instead of "a highly-developed aesthetic
Fire Hand personality types, like Earth Handsense".
personality types, are very practical. But they areIf you successfully completed this proofreading
also full of energy and enthusiasm. This meansexercise, good work! You may well have the
they not only get things done, they get thingskeen eye for detail necessary to become a proof
done quickly. On the down side, they are alsoreader.